Review Detail of DaoOfCulture in Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

I gave the writing quality a 4 only for the few mistakes scattered about the FF; otherwise, the overall rating would've been a 5. I like this novel far more than the author's DxD one. I did drop his DxD fic a while back, but I do remember not quite liking the flow of the story. It wasn't that it was badly written but how to say this... the progression didn't feel right(?)--it just didn't feel all that natural. This FF makes up for that, and the flow of the story is superb. The character interactions and their development are exciting and logical while keeping the original characters'--well--character. The author has a good grasp of the characters' personalities and smoothly creates interactions between canon and OC characters. The OC characters' personalities are well fleshed out, and I actually wouldn't mind a harem or no harem. Both routes seem perfectly reasonable due to the characters' personalities, the world they are in, and the time period. I do lean more towards no harem as I love the dynamic between the two characters but I wouldn't mind harem either due to how the author fleshed out their personalities. I don't really want to say more as I feel I'll start spoiling, if I haven't already, so I'll stop here. I greatly look forward to more chapters of this and keep up the great work, author-kun.