Review Detail of TheImmortal25 in Tyrant of the Ruined Sun

It's a good book no doubt but I can't read it. The author after every sentence or paragraph, has put in one of these, '!?'. It is so annoying and completely breaks the immersion of the book, as unlike small full stops, or commas. These are giant punctuations, that draw your attention. Like at an end of nice family sentence these punctuations are used making me question what the hell is going on. And the weird perspective is just off putting as it is neither the 3rd point of view nor the 1st point of view. For those who like fast paced story, this is good, but there is not sufficient amount of explanation or world building. Even if we remove the amount of World Building, at least keep the pace wabit medium. From MCs return to his plans and ascension is going incredibly fast as if, the MC is not even breathing for one second. Considering the position of the ones whose funeral is being conducted, it just seems to rushed and weird. Overall, if you want good immersion from the very beginning with levelled amount of World building then this book ain't for you.