Decent story, only real problems are the grammar issues, and some things out of place. Examples: reaper using a sword (he does have guns) tracer getting guns but never using it patrolling tracer creating lightning even though she has a time quirk Tracer never actually being involved in experiments on I-island Kaminari having actual control of his powers at the festival Though there are some good parts in the story, like tracer’s path to controlling her abilities and losing control at the start. (Although it’s Winston’s fault.) forgive me if I missed anything, I read up to about 60% of the story which was like up to chapter 56
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