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Mimi703
Mimi703Lv31yr
2023-10-23 08:05

i started this book with high expectations and for the first few chapters those expectations were met but then i the mc started deviating from her plans she plans to stay in the ranch for the apocalypse with lots of resources and that was what made me more addicted to the story but then the men enter her life and then she takes a 360° turn and what annoyed me the most was after she went on a little adventure to rescue one of the male leads brother instead of going back she is again made to change her plans because the boys can not just sick it up and realized that this is the f*****g end of the world they cannot go around playing savior and ruining the fl's plans because they want to rescue someone close to them who later on does not appreciate their efforts and this is just the beginning their litty trip causes a lot of more unnecessary things that could have been avoided id they all just stuck to the plan after rescuing one of the ml's brother .But I Do have to say I Love the authors writing style and maybe this book just wasn't my type of book i just hope this doesn't discourage the author from writing because although i didn't really like the progress of the book because of my preference I believe it was still a way better book than all the other s**tty books I have read on webnovel I hope to read more books from this author 😁

Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Devilbesideyou666
4.7
509 Chs

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Devilbesideyou666
Devilbesideyou666Author

Hey! Thank you so much for your review! I get that that part didn't make the most amount of sense... (and it is explained why she has to go through all of this later on in the novel!) I wanted her to grow and develop as a person and it was hard to do that if she just stayed at the ranch. She also needed to regain all the memories that she had forgotten due to a past trauma. But I really do appreciate your encouragement when it comes to my writing! I do have two other novels currently going right now, Star's Ships and Dancing With Monsters. I also have another novel based on the same world coming out in November. Don't forget about my discord channel if you want spoilers! <3 D

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lasygirlfriend
lasygirlfriendLv13

I'm glad I read this comment it makes me want to keep reading cause I was mad about what the MLS are forcing her to do but I'd it's explained then I'm curious enough to continue

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Jennifer_Luffman
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Adore this book. MC is awesome and doesn’t suddenly become a pushover when meeting male leads!!!! Strong female that doesn’t meet overpowered male to save her over and over. I’m sooooo happy to read this. Thank you so much for writing it.

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B_Mitchylle
B_MitchylleLv13

I am a big fan of transmigration/reincarnation novels. This novel is really refreshing to read. The pacing is not bad and grammar is good! thanks author san!

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Jmi_Lana
Jmi_LanaLv15

I a huge fan of this book! I enjoy reading transmission stories and this one’s got to be the best one yet! The story line is good. I like the MC and her harem. Just wish the writer would write more 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Mai_Socop
Mai_SocopLv15

I adore apocalyptic novels so this is a good read. Female lead creates her own friend zoned harem and builds her haven for the apocalypse. Wish I could read more, I seriously can’t wait. Updates are killing the binge reader in me. Have all my coins I need more.

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honeyfah4life
honeyfah4lifeLv14

where to read this online for free?? kindly share me some link.

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Scarlet_Rose_3933
Scarlet_Rose_3933Lv4

The character talks about how she has changed from her past self but her character and actions seem to remain the same throughout much of the plot. It would be interesting to see if other readers interpret the story development differently.

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Randomguy791
Randomguy791Lv5

I had high expectations early on with this story but i am not impressed. its not bad but it also didn't meet expectations. spoilers ahead. skip it if you dont want spoilers. the female lead went back on her plans so quick. at first the plan was to let everyone else die and she lives her life on a ranch she buys but then she is out trying to save people. while helping people isnt bad, most of the people she meets, namely the military generals are very stubborn and ignorant and acts in a way that i feel doesnt deserve her help. Yet she still follows along with their commands to a certain point and assists them when s he isn't obligated to do so. the military generals also dont have the power to force her either but she always seem to give in to it, because her male lovers seem to agree. perhaps the author is trying to get character development for the female lead but it is simply done in a way that doesn't quite fit her character given the way she acts and is described, which makes it feel very forced.

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Emelyyn
EmelyynLv4

Lost interest after chapter 20 smtgh. The FL is stupid and the conversation between fl and other ppl is stupid too. She learned nothing form her past life. So many annoying and unrealistic things. Especially when fl buy livestock,farming etc. No massive buying for foods or satisfying feeling from hoarding supplies. Overall painful reading🙄🙄

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ReadinAddict
ReadinAddictLv15

I’m not a zombie fan but this story gives a new view to zombie breed. Quite creative and cute. I’ve never been the type to purchase all batch chapters at once but it’s that good!!! Definitely recommend!! ❤️❤️

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Dragonmaiden
DragonmaidenLv14

I am loving this book and the MC’s personality. Only 30 chapters in and I’m obsessed. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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