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Your_Daddy_FA
Your_Daddy_FALv110mth
2024-01-20 09:09

Well, when one started reading the novel, some might think that in a classic novel they can predict the end of it, but in the middle he finds some different things from the usual and interesting. But for me, the more I didn't like was the length of the events and the way MC's thinking.

Young Master Returns for his Abandoned Wife

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It's my first serious attempt in FL, please be kind. Don't forget to drop reviews, comments, powerstones, and gifts! If you want to read my other novels, click on my pen name.

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I'll be frank. I only read this because a friend of mine recommended I check it out. You see, I'm VERY picky with the stories I read online due to bad experiences with snowflake writers and their snowflake master pieces. I gave this a perfect rating not because I loved the story. I've read countless stories with this cliché plot and honestly, there comes a time it gets boring. It's the PRESENTATION. Obviously, Miss Writer knows what she's writing. And that, I saw minimal errors. I only saw 3 minor errors (typo, grammar and vocabulary) that can be outright fixed. Keep it up. 👍🏻

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Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

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