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Faechan
FaechanLv112yr
2023-04-05 19:56

I like it from just the first chapter, there are a few subtle mistakes though. But the whole concept of the book is wonderful, it makes the readers feel without putting in too much effort.

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Cypher_Lunex
Cypher_LunexLv2

What mistakes? I'll really like to know, I couldn't spot any...

Faechan
FaechanLv11

I spotted a few while a I read but it's alright now. The author has corrected them already.

Cypher_Lunex:What mistakes? I'll really like to know, I couldn't spot any...
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Cypher_Lunex
Cypher_LunexLv2

Okay, so.. I've got three words; The book is REALLY good! Whoops! Those are actually five words but yeah, don't blame me.. Okay so let's move to the reasons I think the book is very good, 1. The world building; this is a fantasy romance as you already know and as you also know, it requires world building (of course ).. the world in this book is so intricately described that it pulls you in it– I say kudos to the author, trust me when I say I know how hard it is.. 2. Also the character complexity (lol, is that what it's called? Pardon my vocabulary.. ) is adequate and you can see that each character has unique, different sides to them.. get what I mean? 3. The vocabulary, how come I haven't mentioned this before? Anyways, as far as I've read, I haven't spotted any grammatical/vocabulary error yet (you're free to check and point it out to me if you see one..) 4. I can't say anything about character development yet since obviously, it's still ongoing but the characters are good so far.. and the author leaves you with the ability to relate with the characters. My personal favorite is Mr. Golden mask, Naria is my second favorite yet.. Something for the Author – writing is hard (I'm saying this because I know and right now, I have a writer's block and my brain is fried.. ) But you you know what keeps writers going? Knowing that their work is really good and that people appreciate it. I do and I do look forward to more updates <33 (I secretly wish you don't lock it because man, getting coins is hard) Don't listen to me, actually do because I'm hoping to do the same😅...

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