Great story! The idea of a character being trapped in a world that stems from his own desires and imagination creates a sense of mystery and suspense, making the reader curious about what will happen next. The way the protagonist has used his dreams to escape reality adds a layer of depth to the character and makes the reader empathize with him. The question of what will happen when the protagonist is given a chance to make his dreams a reality creates a sense of anticipation and sets up the central conflict of the story.
Vigilant_Dreamer
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