Review Detail of Sosynovsky in The Vision
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Op mc with infinity stone and system from the beginning, what can possibly posses a threat to him? Nothing, he can simply fly to the vast universe to get stronger, but no. He is f*cling around founding useless, weak characters and forming team with them to protect Earth. From Thanos ? Original Vision may suck, but our mc is different, he can use mind stone energy and cut Thanos in countless pieces. Also, go learn f*cling magic, teleport to his throne and kill him, while he has 1 infinity stone. 100 times easier than training useless team and slaying thanos in solo, while they shouting how cool mc is. Stop writing ch for word count, it was ok at the beginning (40ch), when there were interactions needed for the plot progress. Now they are only for word count, simply ocean of water.
The Vision
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Black_Flame_8005:SPOILERyou should read it back, and see how easy the mc killed thanos without learning magicđ¤ˇđ¤ˇ
Plot armor can definitely be a thing for many characters, not just the MC. It's sort of like a tool writers use to keep the story going. But I think what makes a character compelling is how they handle those situations, even with that protection. It's not just about the armor; it's how they wear it that makes the story interesting.
Sosynovsky:Easy is because of his opness, without a plot armor he is nothing
His plot armor is absolute invisibility, no matter where he goes he is the strongest, canât lose to anyone. With settings like this all his decisions have no consequences. Whatâs a point in reading it, if there is no intrigue ?
Black_Flame_8005:Plot armor can definitely be a thing for many characters, not just the MC. It's sort of like a tool writers use to keep the story going. But I think what makes a character compelling is how they handle those situations, even with that protection. It's not just about the armor; it's how they wear it that makes the story interesting.