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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv31yr
2023-05-10 00:39

It was a roller coaster ride truely. read it it saves the amusement park fees. Writing quality - It's great but what i loved the most is names of the character. these character names are going to be all time favourite for me from now on. story development - it's not fast or slow paced the but you do need time to immeresed in the novel at first. it's a mystery for god sakes guy give it time readers. Character design - what can i say i don't want spoil you guy but the male lead is funny evil charcters are evil. especially the bloody princess i meant the vampire princess. updating stability - 5 star for this author keep up the good work world background - great mystery various evil assassin organisations but author made it easy to understand. i just want to spoil this novel so bad 😭.

The Uncrowned King Of Assassins

Mi_22
4.8
59 Chs

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Mi_22
Mi_22Author

Meant a lot to me😁. Thanks! And read your manuscript as well... It was really great. You should release it, soon.

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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv3

thank you.

Mi_22:Meant a lot to me😁. Thanks! And read your manuscript as well... It was really great. You should release it, soon.
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No_Harem
No_HaremLv4

is this a harem or no harem ?

Mi_22:Meant a lot to me😁. Thanks! And read your manuscript as well... It was really great. You should release it, soon.
1yr
Mi_22
Mi_22Author

are u asking about my novel or his manuscript??😅no, my novel doesn't have any harem🙂.

No_Harem:is this a harem or no harem ?
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No_Harem
No_HaremLv4

Thanks for replying

Mi_22:are u asking about my novel or his manuscript??😅no, my novel doesn't have any harem🙂.
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Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

Any romance then?... hoping for a no..

Mi_22:are u asking about my novel or his manuscript??😅no, my novel doesn't have any harem🙂.
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Mi_22
Mi_22Author

hmmm... not much. enmity between old associates is there

Ikka_Sne:Any romance then?... hoping for a no..
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