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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingLv32yr
2023-04-22 23:59

Review based reading the prologue and 4 chapters. Good writing quality but not quite 5 stars (I read stories a bit more fluent and richer dictionary). Updates not daily so I gave 4 stars. Story development feels quite slow considering how much I read so 3 stars, seeing the m.c. was just introduced marginally up to now . The range of personalities Is various but I don't really love the strong feigning being weak m.c. so 4 stars. The world background definitely isn't the usual japanese isekaid and Is presented in good way, leaving the question about the possible but not realized Word domination of the O.P. race. In the complex the read is strongly recommended to who likes the spy setting.

The Uncrowned King Of Assassins

Mi_22
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59 Chs

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Mi_22
Mi_22Author

Thanks, man🙂

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Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4

I respect your point of view Sir...but for me. I think the book deserves at least a half-star more for the author's effort in the edgy chapters he/she provides us... 1. Daily updates are not possible when you have to think and write at the same time until you have a pile of chapters stored in your hands....for the first draft the chapters are quite impressive for a non-native speaker 2. The pace is quite steady... neither fast nor slow and represents every fact and reason with time. So a reader could not lost in 3. Yes although it's four stars are presentable but my last fifth star goes to the author for writing an such edgy interaction between characters Everyone ownd their view but let's not discourage them instead give them encouragement to write more, lean more

2yr
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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingLv3

Everyone is free to have his own opinion as you said too. I encourage the author and recommended the read to those who like the specific kind of genre/m.c. Finally, I could argue on the impossibility of daily updates (with around 1000 words) preparing a structure of the story before starting to write the chapters using 3-4 hours max daily(depending mainly on the typing speed ). Sometimes honest criticism is preferred to encouragement/flattery (at least that's my case ). My only hope for any wanna-be author is to enjoy his hobby and improve their writing/story telling skills. Have a great day.

Moonwriting:I respect your point of view Sir...but for me. I think the book deserves at least a half-star more for the author's effort in the edgy chapters he/she provides us... 1. Daily updates are not possible when you have to think and write at the same time until you have a pile of chapters stored in your hands....for the first draft the chapters are quite impressive for a non-native speaker 2. The pace is quite steady... neither fast nor slow and represents every fact and reason with time. So a reader could not lost in 3. Yes although it's four stars are presentable but my last fifth star goes to the author for writing an such edgy interaction between characters Everyone ownd their view but let's not discourage them instead give them encouragement to write more, lean more
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Mi_22
Mi_22Author

what is happening down here??😶😶

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Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4

..............

Mi_22:what is happening down here??😶😶
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