MARIA AS WAIFU!!!!! .... also where is the Rl8 tag? We demand lemons[img=exp][img=exp] [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp

Finally an ff with different anime being used. I'm starting being sick of reading ff around naruto, one piece, dxd, hp, marvel, dc

well... there are almost no FF of this series... i thought it was a waste to not date both Sicily and Maria..... i also have a redhead waifu fetîsh sooooo Maria fanclub =P

I wanted to denounce and take down this fanfic just for breaking the fourth wall that was totally unnecessary in the first chapter. Well, I'll leave the fanfic, the author jokes too much and writes literally anything. Someone without a minimum of seriousness will not write something good of their own free will.

complete nonsense trash gods, stupid system and various script holes. The story has potential but it needs to be polished more. A rewrite when the story is done would be nice

not worth it guys, author dont understand OP, he thinks its like Saitama BS... clearly writer here have amateur knowledge to OP MC.... what a pathetic fanfic... need to be rewritten

Well, erase the god of the beginning, the system, who abandons his grandparents at 11, the world already offers powers op use them, watch some romance tutorials and your story would easily be one of the best.

Author has a good idea for a start but does not have a comprehensive understanding of the world he is building on and the fact a system is implemented in such an easy world tells me that this is more of a wishfulfilment story than is a good quality What if story. If you're okay with random, unnecessary, pointless power-ups being thrown in. Then go for a read, just be warned

You have good ideas and you handle the interactions between the characters well, but you fail to implement all the clichés that everyone copy and paste, which just ruins the world you chose.

I only encouraged myself to put my comment , because of those 1 star reviews I read(it was the most stupid and silly thing xD , I just see you cry for something that if you want you can read the original and stop crying for not being equal to the original xD ) I'm not going to say that the story is perfect, I have read worse and now with time they are better at writing stories, and I know that writing something is not easy, but if you approach to read a fanfic, you will realize that there are authors who write the same as the original just changing something and putting other things for their main character and on the other hand there are other authors who like to change and not follow the same and give it their special touch. (and I applaud it, because what sense does it make to read something that you already know is going to happen, and for the same reason the novels of antagonists that reincarnate or travel to the past are famous, because they like to see something different not something that you can already predict, I can continue criticizing those who put 1 star for nonsense), but it would be a testament xD. - and I can only say cheer up author, I hope you finish it and don't leave it like many authors.