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BPD2023Lv21yr
2023-04-16 11:10

Mabagal takbo ng kwento pero trip ko naman kase nasusubayabyan yung slow growth ng MC. kita yung build up ng bawat meron siya. Kita mo na pinaghirapan talaga n'ya.

I Will Rise Back: Obtaining The Overcome System

DL_Mondays
4.4
48 Chs

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DL_Mondays
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Hey, what's up everyone? It's your friendly neighborhood author here. First off, I just wanted to give a big shoutout to all of you amazing people who decided to give my web novel a shot. Seriously, you're all awesome. I hope you're enjoying the ride so far. Writing a novel is a new adventure for me, so please bear with me if there are any awkward moments along the way. But hey, life is all about taking risks, right? I promise I'll get the hang of it eventually! And guess what? I just created a Discord server for our novel. It's the perfect place for us to talk about anything and everything. We'll have discussions about the novel, share illustrations, drop location pins, chat about our daily lives, and of course, post some dank and based memes. The server is open to all, so come join the fun at discord.gg/gavUjDTw! I'm always open to feedback, comments, critiques, and suggestions. So, don't hesitate to share your thoughts on the novel. I promise I won't cry... too much. ;) Thank you again for taking the time to read my work. You guys rock! So, I hope you stick around, keep reading, and keep spreading the word. Who knows, maybe one day we'll have a Netflix adaptation of our little story! Cheers, DL_Mondays

1yr

M_dee
M_deeLv11

The story is so interesting and captivating making me eager to know what is going to happen next.

1yr
can_you_see
can_you_seeLv3

its a decent quality where I don't instantly notice errors and its not as bad as mtl but I haven't been analysing all of it so I might be wrong I haven't checked how many updates or fast it is as I just randomly picked this up but the story is better than most cliche novels where its kinda realistic or at least adds a realistic vibe but has the classic poor and poor family to rich and powerful with a system so some potential the characters don't feel that 2d compared to Chinese characters that mostly show-off or are envious you can see that some characters are indeed hurt and their actions so they could seem to be like real people with the background there hasnt been much development with 11 chapters but I wonder how system will work with a seeming modern world

1yr
Dahlrei_Leor
Dahlrei_LeorLv3

I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this I recommend this

1yr
Darlarist
DarlaristLv12

Reveal spoiler

1yr
DogeCoinMemerReads
DogeCoinMemerReadsLv2

Has a fresh take on the classic rich to poor face slapping genre, which I am liking so far. It's also interesting to see this genre from a new culture. While it's only a few chapters in, it shows promise and has good potential. I can't wait to see where the author takes the story from here. I'll update my review once more chapters are released, but for now, I'm hopeful and enjoying what I have read so far. I hope the author keeps up the good work!

1yr
FranxinnV
FranxinnVLv2

Ang ganda ng kwento. Nakakatuwa basahin, at naiyak ako sa simula. Kung totoo lang sya gusto ko makilala si Daniel sa personal. Try nyo din po basahin.

1yr
AkoAyIsangGuro
AkoAyIsangGuroLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Panon_
Panon_Lv5

Gooood......................................

1yr
SSTheaRak
SSTheaRakLv11

The world building in chapter 1 is very good and officeife in chapter 2 is something I can relate. Keep up the good work. I recommended this to anyone as I will keep reading this.

1yr
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