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Chase_Xavier_123Lv31yr
2023-05-17 12:42

Oh my I can't tell you how much I love Henry's character. Writing Quality - It's good, would need a editing once and it will be great. I really enjoy 3rd pov novel and novels in Rebirth and transmigration genre. Happy to find this one. Story development - It's not really fast and slow paced it's perfect I liked how author handled the pacing. But what I love the most is the character design of all the characters - how Henry got a back bone, i don't really mind the possessive male lead. (it's an acquired taste) 😉. That cheating bf and the jealous sister should get their karma coming for them. Updating stability -Do your best author. But Quality over Quantity. Take care of yourself too. World Background - First it starts with a really normal world but then it unfolds supernatural elements like transmigration along with historic elements. I would love to see how author will explain Mc's transmigration though.

Thirst(BL)

Sweet_Vanilla553
4.8
46 Chs

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Sweet_Vanilla553
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Sweet Vanilla is here to fulfill the shameless five-star author review.🤗🥰 I hope everyone enjoys my work, "Thirst". I am very glad to know. And thanks everyone for voting and commenting. Your support means a lot to me. Thank you very much! As my English might be confusing and not perfect, you can ask anything you are confused about. I am very glad to interact with you.👍😌 So today, I am here with a few arts for this family. Since my explanations are not well-detailed, I hope this can help you to draw an image of them in your mind. Happy reading! Wish you good luck. Thank you! 🤗😘

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Sisira_Warakagoda
Sisira_WarakagodaLv1

My friend! You started another series? I didn't know. Now I saw and read all the chapters. So here I came to give you my review. Fantasy with my boys! I love this. Gotta join Henry to punish that scum father. Whoever comes with me, I bless you to get transmigrated into the world you want. 😏 Keep going author... I am here got uuuuuu.....

1yr
Imsuperberbs20
Imsuperberbs20Lv13

The grammar is on point and the story telling is deliciously superb! It doesn't take a genius to figure out that this story is well-planned by the author. Kudos to you sweet vanilla! I am very much drawn by the intrigues of this book and I want to know more about the curious case of Henry. 💕

1yr
Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Author

Thank you for the review. Since it didn't get published, I did it myself. 😌🤷🤗🥰

1yr
Myrtle_S
Myrtle_SLv1

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Vigilant_Dreamer
Vigilant_DreamerLv1

An intriguing start and the grammar is pretty good. Henry is a very interesting character and the interactions between the characters are very. I am looking forward to new chapters in the future!

1yr
Chadowp
ChadowpLv12

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Trinit33
Trinit33Lv2

It's an interesting book, especially the synopsis, keep it up.

1yr
Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Author

Aaah...This is the second review that didn't get published. I couldn't see any offensive words in this though. So I am just posting that review here because I feel bad about not publishing it.

1yr
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