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Ok I'm going to preface this by saying I'm not the biggest fan of Chinese novels. I do have a few I like but they always all feel the same and I question they way people speak and act. It doesn't feel natural but this...this is really good its really early to tell but I'm a fan already. I can certainly tell that it's inspired by Chinese novels but it hasn't had any of the issues I typically have about them(at least yet) if it fontinues as it is currently I can see this becoming popular

I lowered my review rating. I initially expected a lot from this book, but now the MC is annoying to me. He is a slave to the system and is surprised by things too often even though he knows the plot. I feel like I'm looking at a typical Japanese herbivorous MC, which makes me always dissatisfied with him. But the above is nothing compared to the MC confessing his love for women to do the system's mission. Basically, it's like a self-shaming moment that I can't accept. Why not make the heroines chase the MC instead of making the MC chase the women? To be honest, I don't like this situation.

It's so similar that I know I won't read it even if is as good or better than "I kissed the Heroine...". Jesus saves me, us and everyone from death.

Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.

Okay, after 15 chapters I as the author need to give a new review of my own story. If you want a cringe protagonist, then this story is for you. If you want dubious grammar and probably low quality, then this is for you. If you want a strong inspiration from dubious Chinese novels, then this is for you! If you want a confusing plot, and with the author not knowing what to do, this is definitely for you. So I must say, this is the definitive fanfic

I like this ............................................................................................................. ...........................

Well, what can I say is a typical wish-fulfillment. The beginning was an interesting introduction to the plot and the possible development of both the main character and the secondary characters, both emotionally and in character. But.... there's still a but. It's just the initial impressions, next comes the typical pokemon assembly and getting power for nothing. The character of the girls is not developed, they are written in a pattern like all the wish-fulfillers. Overall: the spelling is excellent (for me personally), the update rate is above average, the plot: banal at the moment. Character design: formulaic. World History: There are interesting mini-notes. In general, if you want a beer or nothing to read, take it bravely, for the rest pass.

Bro this is like the other novel with the same concept “Before I died, I kissed the heroine” Author please tell me you just were inspired by another novel for this fanfic. But either way I’m going to just read at least 5 chapter first.

I like it but just a question. Is this novel copy or based on a certain Chinese novel? Because I know that I read a Chinese novel with almost the exact same synopsis. The only difference is that it is based on cultivation world while this novel is based on DxD. Just curious to know if the author is inspired from reading that novel.