Review Detail of _Casper_ in My Daemon System

Looks like I need to change my review, so yeah, here's a new review, [1] Writing quality » Awesome, the author has a large and diverse vocabulary and provides a detailed Description. 5stars. [2] Story Development » It's still in the growth stage, but I have high hopes. 4stars. [3] Character Design » Growth phase, but up until now, he is definitely not a wuss and can talk normally to others, {Not like those dumb MCs who bite their tongue while talking}. 4 stars. [4] Updating stability » 11 chaps a week what else do you want? 5 stars. [5] World Background » A little different, { In the past, there were some alien species waging war against humanity, but later they patch up, and the government doesn't want the same shii to happen again, so a military school type thing was created to train students.} 4 stars. Now what I did not like. First, the conversation sometimes feels unnatural. So does the MC, not always but sometimes. And I guess that's it. If I find any mistakes in the future then I'll make sure to point them out.