Oh. My. Gods. I LOVE how this author writes the MC, Chris. There is nothing held back here - you get to see the pretty, the ugly, the gritty, and the awkward. Instead of feeling like I'm reading a character I can't relate to - Chris has said, thought, or done something I have done in my waking life. He isn't OP off the bat, he isn't reincarnated or anything - he is just one of us trying to make his way in the world. He just wants to get out of a bad situation. Even if he's a little idle game cheater... I get him, you know? I think the grammar can use work (but whose can't, right?). However, for a first draft - this is great! I highly recommend this to someone who isn't afraid to admit to their humanity. You're going on an adventure with the MC like a little shoulder pet, not simply reading about someone's life from the outside. The sibling relationship is believable, and the reactions to the world around the plot feels gritty and desperate - just like the MC. The #1 thing I love about this author, is how they shift tones so freaking well that sometimes you're like "woah" because it did not follow a cliche or the expectation. Okay, for real - read it. Come make a friend in Chris - and watch how he worms his way out of tight spaces. Highly recommend!

The story is really unique and interesting, its fun watching MC work instead of getting millions in seconds. Keep up the good work Author.

This story is beyond amaizing. I love how the mc is is weak but strong willed at the start. Dear author please give us more updates!!!!!!! !!!!!! Go Go go go go go goooooooooooooooooooooo. I'm loving it

I am giving this a 4.6 star because I think there is an potential to become a great novel and only thing you need to improve is the background of the world.

The main reason I am giving it 4 star because i do not know the story development and the main character of the novel after reading two chapter.

May you be successful little void! Good luck, keep it up, and write well!

Not bad, I don't know why do I always get romance recommendations 🤔🤷, but it's good. Although I wish making money was that easy. 🍵🧑‍🏫

Lol I wish making money was really that easy, I think you could definitely make the story more detailed, but so far it's really good. Can't wait to read more [img=update]

Story has an interesting plot. A lot different from my usual fantasy tropes but I'm sold. Good job author! Keep up the good work.