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CantMessWithGranny
CantMessWithGrannyLv41yr
2023-12-05 13:15

The story is ok and all, and the grammar is good. There’s only 2 problems, one is that he doesn’t use the right way of writing lol, it’s not a style, it’s just wrong. He uses (Name) which is annoying for people who listens to it and also uses - instead of “”, I have no idea why, but he called it “a writer style.” Though he did change it to the right one in the new chapters. Second problem is that it’s incredibly boring to read. Most of the time he just go off topic and start talking about things we really don’t need to know. The story itself is interesting and I don’t wanna hate much because I had an annoying experience, but do try it for yourself and you might enjoy it

Naruto: Secret organization

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Thanks!

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author-san I hope his parent and wife didn't isekaid with cuz theres a possibility that he might end up seeing his wife being pounded by other guy cuz they didn't recognised each other. please nooooo!

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It's ok, it could be better. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but overall it's not bad. I don't know if it will be like those protagonists that only follow the original story, if it is, then I'll just go reread the manga. But until now it's interesting.

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