Review Detail of swordmen in The Growth of a Titan

Hmm, I've read chap one, at least i tried. But before I make a comment on your book, tell me that you think your doing different from the books you've read?

what*

Absolutely different from anything I've read before, this story

If you can point out an error in my book that can be fixed, that would be great.

I was asking what your book was doing different from the ones you've read. I dont want to tell you because my opnion is biased. I just want to hear your thoughts, and understand how well you know basic writing techniques... if you can point out those differences then you'll understand writing techniques better. As for what writing techniques I'm talking about its things like sentence structure and character dialogue structure. How different is your sentence structure and character dialogue structure from the books you have read? That's what I'm asking

Also, I might be misunderstanding you and asking unnecessary things. Did you needed my help in spotting spelling errors in your book, or how to write a book?🤔

I make all of the sentences that are composed in my head; I only choose one or two dialoques.

Yes, I'd like to ask straightforward questions on how to improve my skills. I simply lack this one thing so that the reader can sense the character's emotions.

Do you have discord perhaps? If so then its better to have a conversation there