Hello everyone, the novel has ended. The last arc takes a step back and switches the main character. I had fun writing it, hope everyone has fun reading it. Please gift some if you enjoyed it. Fine if you don't. Regards, Divinationelder.

The story is really captivating especially since I haven't read a Cultivation in quite a while. I felt really good reading it. The only issue is the way you write it. Try to cut the Paragraphs short and edit it a little bit. After that it'll be good to go.

It seems more like a list of events than a novel, a list with many grammatical errors. The author thinks this is showing and not telling, but in reality it is just listing things and speedrunning the novel.

This review is based on the free chapters (19 in total). It's a cultivation story that lacks the feel of ancient times. I've read various cultivation and historical stories and this one gives a more modern feel in its speech. The writing quality is not bad, with minor grammatical errors here and there. But it doesn't impede the flow of the story. The author demonstrates great knowledge of the cultivation genre, with the interesting applications of the different elements. I did feel a bit lost within the long paragraphs, but that might just be because I'm used to the short paragraph structure. I think Wang Feng is all right. I'm glad he is ambitious in his own way and is in no way a pushover. But his wisdom doesn't seem to reflect the 85-90 years of experience (synopsis says 85 but in ch 17-19, somewhere in there, the author mentions 90). Regardless of my review, check the story out yourself.

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one of the best cultivation stories I've ever read

Even though it's his first novel, it was pretty smooth, I liked it. . . . . .........................................................................................................................