Review Detail of Hopp in One Piece : The Journey (dropped)

The first few chapters might be too fast, but please know that I will write longer chapters in the future. I just came up with this story at 3 am. and didn't really have that much idea to create. As of currently I am very tired and in a state of half awake, but please know that once I have more time for thinking, I will make the chapters longer. and please just know that I came with the first few chapters in a span of 10 minutes or less. I'm not trying to flex or anything, but please know that I can do better. And one thing I want to tell you, my dear readers. This is the first book that I will be writing, and I would really appreciate it if you would join me on my journey of creating my first book and improving myself. I would really appreciate you commenting on what I should have done or if I made a mistake. That will be all.