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Five stars because I like my story. Welcome to my first novel! As I said this is my first novel so I hope it turns out good [img=exp]. You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback. Have fun reading!
Chaos Guide
Slumbering_Dragon_
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Slumbering_Dragon_:"I finished with writing the first chapter it's just that I am editing it alone," Don't worry and I hope you like it
"I finished with writing the first chapter it's just that I am editing it alone," Don't worry and I hope you like it
Lone_Immortal:Hi I just wanted to know when are you planning to release the first chapter? please let come out fast I canât wait. [img=Why]
Slumbering_Dragon_:"I finished with writing the first chapter it's just that I am editing it alone," Don't worry and I hope you like it
God, no! Speaking as a reader, I just can't enjoy any novel with romance and harem stuff. Though I have to admit, the harem angle in "Warlock of the Magus World" was kind of tolerable since he didn't really 'care' about them. But now that I'm trying my hand at writing, I'm all trying to give a story to the people who spend ages hunting for that perfect story and end up with nothing. [img=faceslap]
copycat_For_reaper:romance or harem i Hope it is none
copycat_For_reaper:then i guess there is no romance and harem, đ
true greed and RI are proof when novels are done right.romance,harem,good,evil, humanity have no place cultivation novels all it is filler relationships are based on interests and profit,if it not profitable the MC should not do it, strictly speaking people who enjoy romance,harem etc are slave to biological and cultural and society they complain about they deserve this and that but really knowing deserves anything it's built to keep the sheep sheep it also limits us from taking the next step forward.i believe most people think we conquered nature we have twisted it slightly but only slightly and strengthen the chains.bacl to the cultivation mage/qi/other novels as you progress you should get smarter think of better GPU,CPU, motherboard mean better things can be run.cultivation is about cultivating the mind (efficiency operation system)(will is very important it contbutes to pain tolerance, energy control etc)(personal truth very important think like this it's closes realized with reality in a sense it's modus operandi the law of the universe is supremacy and that is done through different types of order and chaos.soul important one that is considered a core if it's power enough it's hard to kill,easy to be reborn (not as power) by pulling the materials around into vessel.stores (mind: memories,thinking,will) it's important for it be configured with strong defences against being affected by biological imperatives and those biolgogical imperatives should be analyzed striped once you have sufficient understanding the body can contain a bloodline (it's a good thing and bad look at greed)it's the casing and also a processor and energy storage as the soul.later the soul and and body is hard to distinguished because they interested into a matrix that is hard to Disrupt if you not powerful and wise enough.these are affected by laws and eventually turned into concepts that body turns into
Slumbering_Dragon_:God, no! Speaking as a reader, I just can't enjoy any novel with romance and harem stuff. Though I have to admit, the harem angle in "Warlock of the Magus World" was kind of tolerable since he didn't really 'care' about them. But now that I'm trying my hand at writing, I'm all trying to give a story to the people who spend ages hunting for that perfect story and end up with nothing. [img=faceslap]
Exactly, hopefully, you will find what you are looking for here. However, I would have to warn you that Volume 1 might be a bit slow-paced for some people.
dylan_pyle:true greed and RI are proof when novels are done right.romance,harem,good,evil, humanity have no place cultivation novels all it is filler relationships are based on interests and profit,if it not profitable the MC should not do it, strictly speaking people who enjoy romance,harem etc are slave to biological and cultural and society they complain about they deserve this and that but really knowing deserves anything it's built to keep the sheep sheep it also limits us from taking the next step forward.i believe most people think we conquered nature we have twisted it slightly but only slightly and strengthen the chains.bacl to the cultivation mage/qi/other novels as you progress you should get smarter think of better GPU,CPU, motherboard mean better things can be run.cultivation is about cultivating the mind (efficiency operation system)(will is very important it contbutes to pain tolerance, energy control etc)(personal truth very important think like this it's closes realized with reality in a sense it's modus operandi the law of the universe is supremacy and that is done through different types of order and chaos.soul important one that is considered a core if it's power enough it's hard to kill,easy to be reborn (not as power) by pulling the materials around into vessel.stores (mind: memories,thinking,will) it's important for it be configured with strong defences against being affected by biological imperatives and those biolgogical imperatives should be analyzed striped once you have sufficient understanding the body can contain a bloodline (it's a good thing and bad look at greed)it's the casing and also a processor and energy storage as the soul.later the soul and and body is hard to distinguished because they interested into a matrix that is hard to Disrupt if you not powerful and wise enough.these are affected by laws and eventually turned into concepts that body turns into
Slumbering_Dragon_:Exactly, hopefully, you will find what you are looking for here. However, I would have to warn you that Volume 1 might be a bit slow-paced for some people.
I just hope you with not tease me like the black dragon swallows the stars athour that is definitely a professional dog
Slumbering_Dragon_:Exactly, hopefully, you will find what you are looking for here. However, I would have to warn you that Volume 1 might be a bit slow-paced for some people.
dylan_pyle:I just hope you with not tease me like the black dragon swallows the stars athour that is definitely a professional dog
Would've been better if you used a Paragraph or two, but I still got the gist of most of what you wrote, and I completely agree. (though the last quarter was, to say the least, completely unintelligible to me and I am still currently trying to decipher what a lot of it means.)
dylan_pyle:true greed and RI are proof when novels are done right.romance,harem,good,evil, humanity have no place cultivation novels all it is filler relationships are based on interests and profit,if it not profitable the MC should not do it, strictly speaking people who enjoy romance,harem etc are slave to biological and cultural and society they complain about they deserve this and that but really knowing deserves anything it's built to keep the sheep sheep it also limits us from taking the next step forward.i believe most people think we conquered nature we have twisted it slightly but only slightly and strengthen the chains.bacl to the cultivation mage/qi/other novels as you progress you should get smarter think of better GPU,CPU, motherboard mean better things can be run.cultivation is about cultivating the mind (efficiency operation system)(will is very important it contbutes to pain tolerance, energy control etc)(personal truth very important think like this it's closes realized with reality in a sense it's modus operandi the law of the universe is supremacy and that is done through different types of order and chaos.soul important one that is considered a core if it's power enough it's hard to kill,easy to be reborn (not as power) by pulling the materials around into vessel.stores (mind: memories,thinking,will) it's important for it be configured with strong defences against being affected by biological imperatives and those biolgogical imperatives should be analyzed striped once you have sufficient understanding the body can contain a bloodline (it's a good thing and bad look at greed)it's the casing and also a processor and energy storage as the soul.later the soul and and body is hard to distinguished because they interested into a matrix that is hard to Disrupt if you not powerful and wise enough.these are affected by laws and eventually turned into concepts that body turns into
MayoNutSpoonsies:Would've been better if you used a Paragraph or two, but I still got the gist of most of what you wrote, and I completely agree. (though the last quarter was, to say the least, completely unintelligible to me and I am still currently trying to decipher what a lot of it means.)image
in a recent update it seems they fixed the issue of not being able to do paragraphs. Thankfully lol. Well, at least I can now do paragraphs on my tablet. So idk if it actually works for other devices. I recommend still trying it tho.
dylan_pyle:well it's mobile
MayoNutSpoonsies:Would've been better if you used a Paragraph or two, but I still got the gist of most of what you wrote, and I completely agree. (though the last quarter was, to say the least, completely unintelligible to me and I am still currently trying to decipher what a lot of it means.)image