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Natoxic_XLv151yr
2023-07-27 23:54

good concept. lost a clear direction made it skip from one thing to another without any warning we went from a simple suicide mission to and assasisination to a mind control plot with in 10 chapters I Have nothing against that sequence but it happened too fast

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I love this novel, and I'm certain that it's going to be one of the best on this app. Let me break it down. Writing quality: 5/5 The writing quality is spectacular. It has good grammar (surprising for a webnovel novel), great word play that makes sentences flow smoothly, and even better descriptions (if the synopsis doesn't show you that already). The fight scenes are incredibly done too. I don't know how the author did it, but some fights feel like they come to life, while others have been written in a way that allows you to put yourself in the place of the mc. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is amazing! The author doesn't tell you more than you need to know. Its pacing is incredible especially for a reincarnation story, since most other stories either cut to the mc being 14+ years old or take far too long describing the younger years of the mc. The author has somehow found a cozy middle area where it isn't too slow to the point you get bored, and isn't too fast to the point where the author is skipping many things that should be explained. Character Designs: 5/5 The characters not only feel alive, they also feel real. The interactions between the MC's parents feel real. The emotions and reactions feel real. The characters are also very likable. Silas (the mc) has an older sister, but unlike many of the novels on here, she isn't annoying. she's real, and extremely likable at that. The father is kind of goofy but can be serious, the mother is strict but she makes mistakes of her own and is called out for it. The grandmother is a little bit of a D to everyone as she always makes random funny but rude comments (doesn't care about etiquette), but she's been shown to care for her grandchildren. The mc himself is flawed. he isn't social but he tries. He regrets things about his past, but he's still ruthless and doesn't regret many of the things we would have considered "bad". he has his own moral compass, and I love that about him. Updating Stability: 5/5 7 times a week, long chapters. Something always happens in each chapter, making them feel unique and worth the read. World Background: 5/5 The world feels large. the magic system is big, but not complete. The main character is a scientist, so I can only assume that in the future he will add new things to the magic system and make new discoveries. He even mentions that the magic system is "too limiting" and that he will have to change it. He also mentions that he will use mana for technological advancements he was unable to complete in his past life, and since this novel had kingdom building as one of the tags, you can see in what direction this might go. On the discord server, the author has also stated that there is much more about the world that we still don't know, so I'm waiting for that but I'm certain it will be amazing. 5/5 overall, great novel so far. i can only hope for its success so more people can witness it.

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If you’ve read Supreme Magus you can skip the first 15 chapters. This book reminds me of Warlock of the Magus World if the author didn’t know how to write. The sheer audacity is there but the author has no handles on interactions, plot, foreshadowing, and intelligence. Writing fluctuates every chapter it feels like a different author is taking charge of the story. Character inconsistencies are at large and author narration doesn’t make sense. He establishes a rule then break it the next chapter. (Spoiler: A woman believes she mades him her slave, then after a day she sends forty assassins to kill him. Why would she do that to someone she has full control of? One second a guys an entire army to prevent anyone from knowing his name then next chapter the guy tells everyone and her mother his full identity, skillset, blessings and whatever. Happened two times already and has caused him more problems than he could handle. ) There’s no proper baseline of how things worked so instead of being immersed in the story you are threwn recklessly around it. Instead of being properly immersed in the world I feel like reading through a blurred window. If I didn’t get reminded of how the author killed billions of people and ruled the earth every chapter I probably wouldnt have known because of the character acts. The main character wouldnt care about the character as long as their on screen but as soon as they have a tiny interaction with mc he would rather share all his secrets to sacrifice for the character.

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Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. I only read up to Ch100, and after that, I decided to stop reading this novel.. This novel is about MC, who keeps reincarnated countless times after he learns "Life equation" on earth.. MC is reincarnated as goblin, horse, and so on until one day, he reincarnated as fetus who in the progress coming out from his mother ehm.. MC got the memories and knowledge of his past life, but no skill is brought back into this life.. MC got a system to keep him in check.. No quest or mission is given, no communication with the system, and no OP cheat.. You will see the journey of the "baby MC" growth progress.. From the days he is born until he grows older.. By older, I mean 6 years old.. Yes, at Ch.100, MC is still 6 years old kid.. And as MC has going thru many reincarnated cycles, he is not acting as a child at all.. Just by the way MC speaks (rude and ill-mannered) and action (manipulative his own family).. The author ruins the image of innocent kids.. In this novel, the author tries to make MC strong but not overpowered.. You will see how many times MC is in life and death situation at a toddler or kid age.. Instead of letting MC have a peaceful growth phase and learning arc at a young age, the author skipped that and threw MC into crisis situations many times.. There are many times you would see that the author keeps changing the character or outline of the story.. For example, you think MC is just a "curious" individual type of person, but then later, MC seems like "psychopath" and even further later on, MC changed into "willing to do anything" for his family.. There are also other cases, like when you read at the beginning, you will feel that MC has a weak father, but later, his seem weak father is actually strong.. The storyline also changes, like at first, MC is at his village with his family, but later, MC suddenly joins Evil Organisation without mentioning his city/village or his family.. I feel like I am reading a different novel.. The author also uses new terms for power levels like Oryx, Garnett, Topaz, Amethyst, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, and Diamond.. This is my first time that I heard this type of magic power level.. Even I'm not sure if I list it right.. There are also a character that you thought might become his rival or master (important characters for this novel), but they died later on. So, this novel is unpredictable and keeps changing the pace of the storyline and character from a wisp of thought of the author..

Shivam_Thakur_1883
Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv12

final review upto chapter 100... story is average with some flaw and some good point.. cons:- 1)- mc constantly getting into life and death situation. form age 1.5 he is fighting life and death situation as trouble always come to him and boom plot armor survie.. he lives in no name town with all the family member too strong and care for him but still he always end up life and death situation and somehow survive cause he just learned some fking spell few days ago.. 2) the way he use and manipulate his sweet and caring family is very disgusting. he didn't even make sure to make his sister happy who litraly died protecting him. and yeah people are trash family is not smart enough blalbalba ..this all the thing that mc thinks.. but if you see mc from unbiased point he would seem disgusting as a family member his sister end up distancing herself from everyone due to mc mistake and all mc did was played victim card while his sister end up taking blames for mc mistake.. 3) fight is boring and long.. every fight is boring and long the reason is - mc 2 paragraph of internal monoloug after every villains cliche acting or dialouge.. 4) mc hides everything from his family for no reason. and no he doesn't hides his power from rest of the world .. he just lie to his family even if he doesn't need to.... well it's not about trust issue as everyone already know how poerful he is so what is the point of changing the source of his power... but it's okey ... first 3 point is what I trully don't like about this story. pros:- nice story , smart mc , good power system , good grammar .

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