Review Detail of CZFanficsDelta in As a Lucifer in DxD

Well I stayed in chapter 8, I ran out of energy to continue reading, if it were not for the forced and fortuitous moment that changed mc we would have until that moment in chapter 7 a naive mc, without interest and empty where he could only justify it under the pretext of acting like a child giving me to read a bittersweet or dispassionate beginning of a mc with the personality of a character of a third party (npc).. still the story has the potential to grow and develop better due to the very strange concept and hard to find from the usual stories that take place in kuoh without originality (I don't criticize those stories) also this is not a criticism, I understand that it is difficult to write a good story, so I will keep giving it a chance, when I reach 30-50 chapters I will upload another review of this story and see if it is really worth it yes, if the story develops well as I hope and wish, I will raise the rating accordingly, I will give you power stones when I reload to support you in your effort and wishing a good development :) in summary a 3.8 waiting for a good future development to raise the rating