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Review Detail of Deonstra in Luffy is Lost in The MHA world, but he gets taken in by Momo's dad

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Deonstra
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I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight

Luffy is Lost in The MHA world, but he gets taken in by Momo's dad

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