this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read! it has made me crack up several times IRL. the characterisation of Luffy is perfect, it's almost exactly like odas Luffy. I've bing read all 20 chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next

One of the best fanfics I’ve read honestly. The characters feel alive and the story is great so far from the 23 chapters I’ve read. I feel like Luffy got nerfed a bit but Luffy is Luffy so it works out. Great read!

i love it its so good and it is very intresting that luffy is in mha world and overall i thinks its very good but the main problem is that it takes a long time update so i cant give it a 5/5

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I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight

The book is fantastic, funny and encapsulates luffy’s character mostly.

It is an amazing story, I wish it would continue ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Love the way Luffy is introduced as a character. The fact that he's having some emotional problems kinda go against what I like about the character itself but, its interesting to see that other side of Luffy. Overall: Amazing, just hope the updates would be more constant.

Story structure could use work. I don’t know why, but it reads a little weird. Dialogue needs a lot of improvements. At times it doesn’t seem natural or characters seem out of character. Show don’t tell. Characters read like cardboard cutouts. It feels like dialogue is only there to move the plot. Nevertheless, it’s an ok read to pass the time.