So, it's been two months since I've been writing this book and here are a few things I'd like the point out to the readers. Yes, I've already covered some of these in auxiliary chapters but my soul will be free if I do the same here Premium: I'll most likely go premium from the 105th to 110th chapter. I'm not in a hurry, and that should be enough assurance for readers that I'll finish this book. Writing quality: I'd like to say my writing style is nice, from the start too. Also, I do my best to avoid spelling errors and grammatical errors, sure, no one's perfect but I try to be for my readers. Thanks: One thing I can appreciate a number of WN readers for is how most of them give your book the respect it deserves by reading at least 50 to 70 chapters before deciding whether or not to drop it. So yeah, thanks. Harem: it's 50-50, because I haven't decided how this book ends, and by end I mean if it'll be a happy ending or tragic one. Main Character: The MC is a pervert yes, I established that well enough in the first chapter, but that's because he lived a life no one would want to. He shut himself away from reality and drowned in depression, accepting he'd never be loved by anyone. The MC's perverted is something anyone can easily overlook because I can draw a line between when he is and when he isn't. The MC only drives 45% of the story give or take, so don't expect him to be in every chapter after I've established him to the world properly. World building: Very large because Rifujin na Magonote is my GOAT and quite frankly he best writer I've ever seen, so I prefer to walk in his footsteps in that aspect. The plot: Great plot! High in protein! Also, like I said, varying stories occur that converge to make for an interest concentrated plot. Genre: My novel is Isekai and somewhat Seinen. The MC isn't a 50 year old dude that reincarnated and begins to think and reason like a five year old.

Still on the 4th chapter but I'm hooked! The story starts off with properly storytelling factors and the descriptions are decent, the world background is nice and their dialogue and characters are unique, so they don't suffer being 1 dimensional. Honestly I won't read until it gets like 20 more chapters, I love the book already and I'm a fast reader so I gotta wait a bit and since I'm new to Webnovels it's pleasant to see new novels like these it has TBATE and Birth of The Demonic Sword vibes but unique in its own way and system.

Nice book to read, twas really exciting and the characters were well described, really worth the read. The author did a great job on the book.

Can you make the mc a little cooler? Not a pervert who’s only goal is women..he is exactly like rudeus but a little less perverted or as perverted as him..I don’t know..the mc is too much of a degenerate

I think you have a flawless writing style and very good transition in your story. Excellent descriptions and scenes that keep readers on the edge of their seats. Wish you all the best for WSA! Keep up the good work!

Brother, please continue the update of this novel. I am really looking forward to see what is going to happen with Archie and heroines and also their Academy life and future adventures.

The story is getting interesting. I will recommend everyone to read this novel. This novel really has a huge potential. I hope Author will soon start the update of this novel.

Chapter:29 Writing Quality - 5/5 - no mistake spotted for me at least Update Stability - 5/5 - don’t know the schedule Story Development - 4/5 - the MC is growing even if it is a little Character Design - 3/5 - this is just my opinion but I dislike the mc, he is a degenerate with 0 social skills or even the decency to keep a straight face when talking to girls. But, at least he has a kind heart still won’t stop me from disliking him until he matures. World Background - 4/5 - not much is explored but it is talked about Note: I also hate you author for capturing the MC character so perfectly, from his anxiety and his development. He is immature and is probably going to have to take a lot for him to mature, and, I’m curious how your going to develop him.

pretty good story author keep going like this. [img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]