Review Detail of Unattractive in Supreme Villain: Seducing the Heroines

If you want to read something just to pass time and turn off your brain, this is somewhat bearable. Suggestions: This needs a lot of editing on its grammar, the tenses doesn't flow well making the reading experience very disconcerting. It also suffers from over description of the minor things; for example the MC is just going to simply park his car but the sentence include how he turns his wheel and how the tire screeches left its mark, like bruh it's fine for some scenes but turn it down a little 'cause I simply skim over it when it's too excessive. I also feel that the dialogues needed some work because it feels off for some reason. I just don't feel the dialogues engaging (that's just for me). For now that's all.