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2024-04-25 14:59

I'm only 5 chapters and will update this later if it keeps me interested but the early signs are not good. Some information is given to the reader like they should already know what it means, or the scene is not explained properly, it will say there are 30 people in a class them lln say there are 3-5 just a paragraph later, some sentences feel disjointed, like the author changed thoughts mid-word. Also the planet is called blue star, which just feels over used at this point, every other book feels like they use blue star or azura star. I'll update this if it gets better but the first few chapters feel shaky.

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Nope! Just gets worst, can't even make it 10 chapters, it feels like alphabet soup at this point, just throwing in stuff just because. The concept was interesting but the first few chapters felt rushed, maybe it would have been interesting if the MC had picked the arrow tower and could upgrade the arrow tower and to summon it in fights. But this all just feld disjointed and rushed. Shame.

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