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Great_ImmortalLv11yr
2023-04-23 02:46

It's pretty good overall, but has some logical flaws. For example, Odin gives an army to someone who has no combat experience, no command prestige, and appoints a random civilian as deputy commander. Personally, I'm not sure that soldiers will necessarily obey someone whose only trait is to be genius; especially if that person is considered a brat by their standards. I think it would have been much better if Odin had appointed him as a deputy commander in the first place and gained experience over time. Apart from this and a few minor points, I liked the book and thank the author for his hard work.

Loki: The Frozen King (MCU)

SnowApathie
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31 Chs

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thank you for the review. I agree that logically Odin wouldn't give an to someone without experience, however he was somewhat trained by both him and Frigga in giving commands. Taking the lead of an army is another form of training, because he is and will be someone with an important role, so yeah.

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Hello there, this is the author of this story. This story is in an AU of the MCU with the X-Men and some Comics plot and characters. English is my third language, so the writing quality might not be the best, but I don't think there are many grammatical errors. I am currenlty trying my best to update daily. The story is not fast paced but I also wouldn't call it slow paced. I am trying my best to slowly develop all the points of the story, but I am not the best writter. I have slowly developed Loki's family, and I will try to develop other characters, but only the mains one will be teh focus of develoment and such. This is a MCU Fanfic but I have modified some things, like what Yggdrasil is, or Jormungandr. You can use this as a Q&A thread. I hope you will like my story. If you have ideas or plot ou want to see you can also comment them here. Thx everyone for reading this.

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One book, one love: the No-Harem sect reads for romance. No harem sect !!!!!!! ......................................................................

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Alright let's see if the author has improved I hope it is as good or even better than their last attempt ................................................................................................................

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Idk why this doesn't hv more readers. ..

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