Review Detail of Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212 in Technicians fury

This is a fast paced story which flows beautiful. However there are some errors of diction which shows that the author does not proof read his work. Apart from that this is a master piece. One tends to appreciate the way the story opens which tends to build up expectation within the reader, then author beings to narrate the story carrying the reader effortlessly along with the unfolding story.Well done author.