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Lol fic i waiting for u this your 5* It would be a very complex story even if you only use lol characters, I think lol don't go out of the universe for now I've been waiting for a long time lol fic please don't quit author mc's name is not even I've read 100s of lol fics please don't stop writing
OP With a Mystical Harem In a New World
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spectra_phantom:The characters have dialogs like cardboard. You should write better how your feelings got here and more importantly, your personalities. Since K/DA fanfics don't come up much (in the webnovel), I gave 5 stars directly, but there is a lot missing in the story. runs away. I hope my criticism did not offend you and did not dampen your desire to write.
spectra_phantomLv3spectra_phantom
The characters have dialogs like cardboard. You should write better how your feelings got here and more importantly, your personalities. Since K/DA fanfics don't come up much (in the webnovel), I gave 5 stars directly, but there is a lot missing in the story. runs away. I hope my criticism did not offend you and did not dampen your desire to write.