Review Detail of gurpreet31 in Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Frustrating read. Info dumps. They aren't necessary. Its a superficial way of adding background. I say that since the impact of that knowledge is none. It's a detriment to the narrative since the flow of the story is interrupted seemingly every paragraph for a random tidbit of info. Some novels have auxiliary chapters for power scales, levels, etc. I prefer the novels that include the information, as it becomes "necessary" to know. Rather than the author saying, this is all important stuff, here is a whole chapter for info that will serve you nothing. Here is a block of text about a random aspect of the world that doesn't matter at all. The notes act as if all readers have 0 IQ. Both info dumps and author's. The author's notes are intrusive. Random comments in the text, or just at the end of text. They sometimes are simple and harmless like, "memorable visit indeed". Its just pointless to add. Other notes are defensive notes, as if to defend against readers saying why MC is being reckless, or something else. MC goes potion crafting, fear not, we have very necessary info dumps about alchemy to explain things. Author note talks about how MC has shadow guards following him all the time. Next chapter, he is interacting with them. The note is pointless if we can read about these things. I've got other problems but just these 2 make the novel a plodding read.