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Blackwhip
BlackwhipLv41yr
2023-03-28 20:50

the author should practice more with grammar and expand his vocab. Story Development is pretty bad, some not fleshed out enough, some things far too drawn out. the Character Design is trash. we see the protag go from acting like a manchild to a hardened criminal to a normal Gamer. we don't see much yet, so I'll give, i guess 4.

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