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Danatos_2000Lv1011mthDanatos_2000

The overall idea of the story is really nice but the author is a newbie. Writing style and tempo is terrible. I'd really like if the author got an editor who could rewrite thebstory with better words

Reincarnated As Karna With System In Mahabharata

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Liked it!

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Genesis_writerLv3Genesis_writer

then try Getting Reincarnated As Karna With System In Mahabharata

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