Review Detail of Daemon_Sultan in reborn in DXD as red dragon (domineering dragon)

Just because it sucks, It doesn't mean a child did that. You are just mean.

Sorry, I didn't realise that it was mean.

Aw. I am sorry as well. I thought it was intentional... Have a Have a Good Day.

You too

Ok let me tell you one thing first 9 chapters of this story are written by my friend. he stopped this story and I picked it up so you can accept proper grammar after ch9

Thank you

welcome

Correct the title

brother title is already is correct please wait until chapter 13 to 14 and you will come to know why I choose this title

You mean the misspell is on purpose?

oh about that no it's not so thanks for reminding me I have corrected it

Can you go back and try to fix it just a bit?

Well sorry about that brother but it's not possible for me to do that because now I have to write new chapter of this fanfic and I also currently working on my 2 novels so I don't have enough time for that but it's not a problem because it's only 9 chapters and it's only contain grammatical errors but from now on I will focus on proper story and grammar. thank you for your support.