Review Detail of STEVIOL_GLY in Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

The previous 80 chapter one was already above-average story, I am excited to see what the rewrite has in its future, Some minor punctuation and spelling mistakes but the story is interesting and lucrative enough for the audience to outrightly ignore them. Overall a 4.8 with some room for improvement in the writing style to make it more lucrative.