Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra_2710 in The Divinity's Curse

The first chapter can make or break a novel. The way implications are used to lead the reader on is quite effective, and the further one reads into the story makes the first chapter that much better. For once, there's very little for me to critique, beyond a recommendation of more extensive proof reading and editing before posting a chapter, as despite how great the first chapter is, the way it's written can be a little hard to follow. Aside from that, this novel is excellent and I think it's certainly worth a recommendation. 4.8/5