Review Detail of eudine in The Divinity's Curse
Review detail
I love the way you write, especially how the plot progressed! I love the way you described the setting, characters, plot, dialogue- everything is perfect. This is well written, and although there’s only a few chapters out at the moment, I think the writing is amazing. Keep up the fabulous work, author!
The Divinity's Curse
Sinbau
Liked by 3 people
LIKEReplies6
LuminescentreaderLv14Luminescentreader
Sinbau:All good and as for romance it’s undecided for now [img=recommend]image
SinbauAuthorSinbau
Luminescentreader:Does your novel have romance? Sorry if my question is kinda cliche.
Justin_BrooksLv13Justin_Brooks
SinbauAuthorSinbau
Ngl I’ve thought about this comment for a month now. So when making the newest chp I had your words in mind and try to redirect it as constructive criticism. I am a first time author so I may not be able to convey pacing all that well but rest assured there is a plan lol. And regardless thank you for taking the time to read my work that means a lot, thank you [img=Smitten]
Justin_Brooks:This book is not really going in any direction it looks like it’s going everywhere and that the main character is everyone’s punching bag. If the author doesn’t change the pace and write like they know where they are taking the story I will drop this novel in the next 10 chapters.