Review Detail of HandsomeWriter in Elemental Tear

Fantasy with post-apocalyptic elements. The writing quality is excellent, scenes are described with just enough words to allow you to clearly picture them but not so much that it feels padded or long-winded. Paragraphs tend to be on the chunkier side but are simple enough to be read without any difficulty. The setting is quickly introduced, and though there is a somewhat large chunk of exposition in the 3rd chapter it is not overwhelming and answers questions that naturally pop up in the readers head in the earlier chapters. Characters don't yet feel very distinct in tone as of chapter 5, but there's been so much emphasis on fleshing out the world that I don't think it could have fit. Overall, excellent read. Good job by the author!