Review Detail of shockfoxx in I Married An Elf Saint

I couldn't even make it through the first chapter before I dropped this hot garbage. If you don't know how English works, I suggest you don't write in it. The author keeps changing pov mid sentence; which is mind breaking. Also, who can't remember the name of their own character? It keeps switching between Phyllis and Felice. I'm assuming those who enjoy this are also non-native English people, who can't understand just how broken the grammar of this story is. I recommend you look somewhere else for a decent story, because the poor grammar makes this one unreadable.