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It has a certain unique aspect in this novel that I liked. Its more like a screenplay than a novel by itself, its reminds me a bit of a CSI episode. If you enjoy these kind of plot, then you may give it a shot. Writing quality: its the only aspect to improve in my opinion. I understand the choice and usage of screenplay structure, however it has some minor issues in the gramar there and here, but nothing a good rewrite can't fix. All in all, keep up the good work

Clearance of the dark

Abel Black

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