The plot is very interesting and I like the fact that it has ample dialogue to keep the flow of the story. The characters all seem to be quite interesting as well. I think Tareq might be my favorite so far. He seems kind and noble. I think you're off to a great start and you should definitely keep at it! The only advice I have is in the future, should you plan to publish this story in print as a complete novel, you might want to shift from the screenplay format into a proper novel format, as it will provide the readers a better experience and make it easier to understand what's happening. But I appreciate your willingness to try a new format and it works really well for what it is. Good luck on your future efforts!
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