Review Detail of Queenpeach4_bl in I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

this book has a lot of potential but here is some criticism I have: 1. Too many ....[ there are after every sentence] 2. The chapters are short [that is fine but when half of the chapter is just a recap of the last one it gets annoying rq] 3. The character seems lackluster [I hope in further chapters we get to see more personality and back story of who the main character is] 4.I don't like the cat[Personal opinion here I don't like systems like that also he's not a Tsundere he's just an as*hole who's occasionally nice]