So far the ff is Good. It's nice that you haven't made the MC related to Arthur. I have often seen ffs where MC is twin or something else...but this take is great. The thing that upsets me is the pacing and it's story development. It's fast...like he just go brrrr. I do like the way...but it just seems so fast that the immersion in the ff gets broken. Smol chaps...that's another thing. The character design on the MC and other characters are shown less so that makes other people who came to read may get confused. Overall experience: It's great and I would recommend it. Ps. If author could work a little bit more on character design and background ..this ff would become Great. It has great potential to be in the rankings.
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