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OnikunStudiosLv131yr
2023-06-15 21:36

Really interesting start. Love the world-building and the way the author has written characters. Grammar is a little lacking the the beginning, but it does seem to get better as you read on.

REBORN TO BE OVERPOWERED

SupremeDaoist2
4.5
94 Chs

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thanks for reading

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The novel seems to be an exciting and engaging story of a reincarnated princess who must escape certain death and uncover the mysteries of her vampire bloodline. The element of danger and the need for survival creates a sense of urgency that will keep readers hooked. The protagonist's growth and development as she learns to take control of her fate adds depth and complexity to the story. The concept of a human-vampire bloodline also adds an interesting twist to the typical princess story, and readers will be intrigued to see how the protagonist navigates this unique aspect of her identity. The theme of taking control of one's destiny and overcoming adversity will also resonate with many readers. To the author, I would encourage them to continue developing the plot and characters with depth and complexity. It would also be interesting to explore the protagonist's relationships with others as she learns to navigate her newfound identity. Overall, the synopsis shows great promise for an engaging and exciting novel that readers will love. Good Luck

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Ayazia27
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Reincarnation of a princess, this is my first time liking reincarnation novels. The early chapters are very story-driven, lacking in grammar and more dialogue than narrative. What else during the fight. However, the novel is very interesting.

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Shamira_Farhath
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Amazing plot Author! I love the way you described the world background and your way of writing is so neat where ai could feel the situation of the protagonist. Good work Author! Keep it up!

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Zhoa_Fei
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Overall, this story is pretty solid, all things considered. The world building could be better, and things could be better explained with the power system. I think there might be potential if things become improved.

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Rare to find female lead system-cultivation type novels! And who doesn't love an OP female lead? Especially the job being Saber, ahhh it's so nice :DGrammar could be better(maybe try grammarly) but otherwise, author has put in a lot of effort in building the background.With the introduction of vampires and the female lead trying to feed on blood, the novel just got more intriguing! (I really don't like Emperor Lin ngl)

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I was sold when I read the species was Human Vampire and Job was Saber God. I love the characters. Great writing quality. I am really looking forward to the chapters.

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THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
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From the first few chapters, I wish there were more dialogue but other than that I'm really interested in the story your developing

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Fire_Duck
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This is my first time liking these types of novels. The early chapters are very story-driven, lacking in grammar and more dialogue than narrative. Nonetheless, the novel is very interesting.

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B_DRAG
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Having delved into the first few chapters of this book, I must say that I am generally impressed with the author's storytelling abilities. However, there are a few areas that could benefit from some attention and refinement.First and foremost, the book does contain a handful of grammatical errors. While these mistakes are not overly abundant, they are noticeable enough to occasionally distract the reader. A thorough proofreading could easily remedy this issue, allowing the audience to become fully immersed in the story without any hiccups.Additionally, I believe the author could improve the overall reading experience by focusing more on the vividness and clarity of scene descriptions. By fleshing out the details and painting a more complete picture, the author can ensure that every reader, regardless of their background or imagination, can easily visualize and understand the events unfolding in the story.Despite these areas for improvement, I must commend the author on the many aspects of this book that are truly captivating. The characters are intriguing, the pacing is well-balanced, and the plot shows great promise. With some fine-tuning, I have no doubt that this book will become a must-read for fans of the genre.In conclusion, this book offers an engaging journey that keeps readers hooked, but it would benefit from some polishing in terms of grammar and scene descriptions. I am optimistic that the author will continue to hone their craft in subsequent chapters and eagerly await the twists and turns that lie ahead.

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