The idea behind the story and the story itself are quite good. However the grammar needs work it's the only thing holding it back in my opinion, but even so its not really that bad of a grammar either. I recommend the read, hope it doesn't get dropped.
Akros_Zero
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LIKEmow:Changed my mind for some reason past chapter two i felt like it got worse, story and the idea behind it are good, but i don't want to bother unless the grammar issues get fixed later on.