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mow
mowLv42yr
2023-04-05 06:44

The idea behind the story and the story itself are quite good. However the grammar needs work it's the only thing holding it back in my opinion, but even so its not really that bad of a grammar either. I recommend the read, hope it doesn't get dropped.

Fate/Poseidon

Akros_Zero
4.7
99 Chs

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mow
mowLv4

Changed my mind for some reason past chapter two i felt like it got worse, story and the idea behind it are good, but i don't want to bother unless the grammar issues get fixed later on.

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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

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mow:Changed my mind for some reason past chapter two i felt like it got worse, story and the idea behind it are good, but i don't want to bother unless the grammar issues get fixed later on.
1yr
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DUCKINGAROUND
DUCKINGAROUNDLv4

so... did it get fixed?

Akros_Zero:😅
1yr
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MagicianMiracle
MagicianMiracleLv4

At first I thought it was going to be poseidon reincarnating which didn't get me interested because he doesn't have meta knowledge which kinda annoys me when a mc doesn't have meta knowledge to make wise choices but it's not poseidon more like a fusion of him and a human that has meta knowledge which got me interested. I hope author doesn't drop this fanfic btw could mc go to the honkai world to get knowledge of advanced technology and upgrade his body? also get a girl from that world umu

1yr

Left_Nut_Of_Madara
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Tis good read it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

My brother, all I can say is that this novel is wonderful. My only request is that the girls who join the harem join in a logical way, not like the Chinese novels. She jumps into his bed as soon as he says hello to her, and the girls have a role in the story, not just s*x tools, please

1yr
WintyLP
WintyLPLv1

nice

2yr
ACON
ACONLv1

Pretty good! Though if only it wasn't a Harem...

1yr
Phaze_MorningStar2
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GodOfGreedAs
GodOfGreedAsLv5

Great work, Great author, personally inspired me to write even better stories love it man, It's a great story you should definitely give it a try

1yr
FargoCake
FargoCakeLv4

At first ive put off from reading this mostly because fate is just complete stupid and messing but i have found my self deply enjoying pls never never stop working on this.

1yr
RyzenShine
RyzenShineLv4

Author if I don't know anything, and I mean ANYTHING about Fate/natsuverse do you think I'll be able to understand anything from that world in your fic?

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