the number of words in the chapter is still too short, you can add the number of words to make it interesting because your novel is still in the first chapter.... In terms of world build, I think it's interesting, because there are very few novels with elements of degeneration in their world settings for the dialogues, monologues and characters please work more hard... I see potential in this novel
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