Item: Uchihas way to become a King
Rating: 2
Author: Jashm

JashmLv41yr

2023-04-13 22:01

system and room temperature IQ MC ................................................................................................................................................

Uchihas way to become a King

Hkj

4.0

78 Chs

Liked by 17 people

Replies4

Dominic_ZibudaLv4

Elaborate please

1yr

SimoncsoLv11

This is probably a mtl translation, so can’ t really except much

1yr

BAM_AMVSLv4

na this is not a mtl translation

Simoncso:This is probably a mtl translation, so can’ t really except much

1yr

Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

if you know this quote then you know what I mean but I'm adapting it for my purposes: if it smells like mtl, looks like mtl and seems like mtl then it probably his mtl (doesn't matter where it's actually from probably mean it was heavily inspired by mtl).

BAM_AMVS:na this is not a mtl translation

1yr

Other Reviews

ThreePlainsLv10

Clearly a chinese translation, it contains arrogant mc, system, short-sighted mc and all other elements of every chinese ff .....,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.. ..,.,,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.z..z.,.z. .,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.

1yr

DemiGod_2972Lv4

Sigh, this is unreadable. For starters, the MC is a edgy twelve year old Kage level fighter who thinks of himself to be the smartest and openly opposes everyone. Next, everyone else has the mentality and planning skills of a 4 year old child. Not a single person in this fanfic is worthy of being called a 'ninja'I'll tell how ridiculous the situation is - The 3rd Great Ninja War has started. Konoha is said to be attacked by everyone. But instead of giving their all in battle, Konoha Elders are trying to get the MC killed and sacrificing hundreds of Uchiha while MC's father kills Root ninjas. What a war plan. Just wow. Oh, and all the village elders are shown to be the epitome of evil. Senju clan? Killed by the elders. Uchiha clan? they have the same plans for them.The characterization doesn't match their canon personalities. The dialogues of the Village Elders also sound to be like of little children rather than of experience war-hardened ninjas. Oh, and a major part of the battles looks to be written by Chatgpt. And for some reason, the author switched from normal way of writing to showing 5 PoV in a single battle. Anyways, story is not worth reading unless you are looking to read something that would amuse you by how bad it is. PS : If Author reads this review, I hope he takes it as a challenge to not repeat idiosyncrasies as the above in his next book and actually put some work into making the characters realistic.

1yr

Breakingmaster1Lv15

I’ve read up to the 25th (most recent chapter) and I have to say, it’s subpar at best. MC seems smart and strong at the begining but actually isn’t. Author has another novel called fire god and it’s vastly superior at only 15 chapters. Honestly that’s the only reason I’m sticking around with this one until chapter 50. If no improvements I’ll drop and unsub from patreon. My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.

1yr

Orginal_PandaLv5

wow you really only write great works, this and the uzumaki fire god fic of your is my all time fav fanfics

1yr

BAM_AMVSLv4

goood uchiha novel no licking sarutobi,.....................................................................................................................

1yr

ErickHenrique_BRLv5

and a good novel so far

1yr

Random_NPCLv1

Feels like I've seen a lot if Uchiha army building novels around lately. Like the rest of them, I'm not surprised that this one also failed. This author also has one other light novel with Bleach powered protagonist in Naruto, that one is actually really great and would recommend it.

1yr

Devil_Gamer_0071Lv2

dropping. i guess you know why. the previous story was good though..................................................., ..................................................

1yr

PureCrowLv4

I really enjoyed this and I hope you continue writing. And ignore the Fool that give bad reviews. , , , , , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,....

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