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Stardreamer12
Stardreamer12Lv32yr
2023-04-13 22:10

Your story was good, but I feel like there's something missing. I can't quite remember what it is, but honestly, it was a good read. There were some typos, but overall, the plot was good and the character development was fine.

HELL VERSE

Dkanime
4.9
45 Chs

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Frances_Austine
Frances_AustineLv1

I was pleasantly surprised on how I couldn't stop reading this author's book though I'm not much of a novel reader but The writing was captivating,The characters were believable and I cared about them,The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn’t put the book down. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes paranormal Fantasy

2yr

Dkanime
DkanimeAuthor

I'll be editing the book over again,so somethings might change

1yr
Yoyuho
YoyuhoLv11

Good story, i not going to lie, but the (.) and (,) are misplaced, with many gramma error, but it still 8/10. Recomended for those who love good story with funny MC.

2yr
Marcel_Mercy
Marcel_MercyLv3

Well I would say the concept of this book is great and would easily top chats with just some little edits here and there. I would do another review when I see what am waiting for...

1yr
Paul_Okito
Paul_OkitoLv4

Author you did a very good work on the fist chapter. I'm the type that loves a story setting like this. You wrote the action scenes immediately, you didn't beat around the bush, Perfect. Although, they are few things that need correcting. If you correct them you're good to go

2yr
LegalWolf
LegalWolfLv12

I really love this novel. After reading some few chapters I'm happy and can't stop reading. Need more

1yr
Prince_Umuragha
Prince_UmuraghaLv1

not bad kid..not bad,not bad at all Plus the fact you're a newbie says you've still got a Long way to go if you want to be known but in all I'll say it again,not bad kid..

1yr
Dkanime
DkanimeAuthor

DKAnime welcomes you, actually I was just getting review for myself,bad boy has too

1yr
CRYSTAL_SHINING
CRYSTAL_SHININGLv3

that was a really good read, and i really liked the beginning , so keep the good work and iam looking forward for the new chapter 👍

1yr
Dkanime
DkanimeAuthor

greedy authorsdarkfantasy,a very greedy authorsdarkfantasy

2yr
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